My video review

So this is my first video review, I do hope to do more in the future.
Please leave any advice that might make future videos better

After rewataching it myself I realize that the editing of my VO could have been better

Your voice is nice and you sound knowledgeable enough.
Keep the gameplay bits 3 - 6 seconds
Don't cut your voice while showing other clips or work more in the transition.
Try adding a nice instrumental while you talk.

Instead of getting into the review right away, maybe having a small intro would help. I would like to hear some background noise while you talk. Maybe the audio from the gameplay would suffice. And when you cut from your voice to the gameplay parts, try to shorten them a bit, just just enough so you can still retain your point. Other than that, everything seemed pretty decent. Overall, it was a good review.