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Post by Keck282 on Thu Jan 05, 2012 3:29 pm

Hips have a weird proportion, and that left hand on the right arm is just weird (it looks like it comes out of nowhere, the boobs could use a little work in how they look with arms below them; being propped up a bit higher to account for the arms below).
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Post by Killaman16 on Thu Jan 05, 2012 11:21 pm

Yeah I had a bit of trouble with that area. I might redo that area so the arms don't look as awkward. As for the hips I'm not gonna touch til I completely figure out a solution to the weird proportions.

Edit: Okay, so far I've fixed her right arm a bit so it doesn't look as awkwardly proportioned and I've raised up boobs so that the torso proportions fit better.
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Post by Killaman16 on Fri Jan 06, 2012 2:54 pm

Okay, just finished an updated version of that drawing I was working on.



Even though the hand still looks pretty weird, the torso looks much better than in the previous version. The boobs have been raised up which allows me to show more of her arms underneath so it doesn't look like the hand is just "popping" out of nowhere.
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Post by Keck282 on Fri Jan 06, 2012 11:55 pm

The only other thing I can see that needs work, besides defining the face a bit is her neck. It is pretty wide (can take it in a little bit).
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Post by Killaman16 on Fri Feb 10, 2012 10:05 am

This is gonna be a weird post cuz I don't know whether or not to upload here or make a new thread in the Digital Art section. The other day I made a speed drawing for my animation class and now were drawing it digitally for our animation project. Here's what I have so far:



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Post by Keck282 on Fri Feb 10, 2012 3:23 pm

That neck seems so long.
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Post by Killaman16 on Sat Feb 11, 2012 12:59 pm

Keck282 wrote:That neck seems so long.
Yeah, since it was a speed drawing I didn't really focus that much on the proportions especially when the legs were not long enough in the original drawing. I'm also trying to fix the clothes he wears since the original had a cape covering his arms and parts of his body.
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Post by Killaman16 on Fri Feb 17, 2012 5:18 am

The other day our class had to turn in our digital drawings of our characters, here's what mine looked like in the end (btw, ignore the file name):



Not my best work considering this is the first time I've actually done something like this.
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Post by Keck282 on Fri Feb 17, 2012 5:35 am

You are improving, though you need to work on your foreshortening of the shoes.
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Post by Killaman16 on Fri Feb 17, 2012 6:32 am

Keck282 wrote:You are improving, though you need to work on your foreshortening of the shoes.
Yeah, that's the big problem I always face with these drawings. The feet and hands, but mainly the feet when it comes to their positioning and as you said the foreshortening.
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Post by Killaman16 on Wed Feb 29, 2012 1:59 am

For comparison's sake, this is what the speed drawing looked like when I first drew it:





My character is supposed to look WAAAAY more serious than he does in the digital art form. Probably because the eyes are smaller in the digital one than the drawing. Oh well, I'll probably fix that later. Here's what I'm working on now:





Got a good start going. Trying to get a nun look going for this character for story purposes.
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Post by Killaman16 on Wed Mar 14, 2012 4:05 am

Okay I finished (sort of) my nun drawing. Here's how it looks:



I'm thinking of redoing her hair though.

My next drawing I'm working on:



I'm going to draw a full body figure of my previous robot drawing. Here's his first concept for reference.


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Post by Killaman16 on Thu Mar 15, 2012 5:28 am

Wow, I finished this new one in record time especially considering that I've never really drawn a robot character before. I took some inspiration from some pics of Mega Man X and Vile. Here's what it looked like in the end:

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Post by MikuHatsune on Thu Mar 15, 2012 1:54 pm

hey killa you should check this guy's tutorials out it might help you out with different things like how to draw clothes, poses, eyes, hair, expressions, fighting stances, reading glasses, etc

https://www.youtube.com/user/markcrilley?ob=4&feature=results_main

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