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Post by Kiko Fri Aug 09, 2013 1:25 pm

So as I said, Raul and I have begun creating a story about you guys in order to express how much we don't hate you all :D (except Nobel)

So here's the first chapter, I'll be adding more chapters as we continue. NOTE: This is just a joke story and shouldn't be taken to heart you fucking faggots, also if you're not in the story...don't worry, you will be in time!


DT and the land of AF

Chapter 1: United Love
Chapter 1:




It's come to my attention that some of you believe that there are a lot of grammar errors. Well, fuck you. I ain't doing this to win some damn literature prize.

Chapter 2: The Welsh Disaster
Chapter 2:




Chapter 3: The Siren's Cry

Chapter 3:



Chapter 4: Winter is coming
Chapter 4:


Chapter 5: Noble

Chapter 5:


Chapter 6: The Moon Has Fallen

Chapter 6:

Right...so I took a break from this for way too long lol, but I did happen to find this when I opened up the story. (can't recall when I made this)

Chapter 6.5: Slipping


Chapter 6.5:


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Post by MikuHatsune Fri Aug 09, 2013 3:44 pm

lmao, pai!
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Post by sex offender Fri Aug 09, 2013 5:24 pm

.....you better hate me.
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Post by NoblePhantasm Fri Aug 09, 2013 5:37 pm

[Report card]

English, Writing: F-
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Post by PT-Desu Fri Aug 09, 2013 8:03 pm

fuck off nobel this was great
keel nobel next now
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Post by Daiyousei Fri Aug 09, 2013 11:10 pm

wow what did I just read oO
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Post by Pai Fri Aug 09, 2013 11:19 pm

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Post by Hollow Sat Aug 10, 2013 12:09 am

LOL
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Post by Zuly Sat Aug 10, 2013 12:11 am

Where's the TL;DR version? Or better yet, the audiobook version?
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Post by CluelessNeko Sat Aug 10, 2013 8:48 am

Oh you kiko. Whatever happen to DT?
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Post by Pseudo Sat Aug 10, 2013 1:31 pm

Zuly wrote:Where's the TL;DR version? Or better yet, the audiobook version?
The audiobook version will be read by unknown.
CluelessNeko wrote:Oh you kiko. Whatever happen to DT?
So, want to do the auidobook?
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Post by Kiko Sat Aug 10, 2013 2:17 pm

It's come to my attention that some of you believe that there are a lot of grammar errors. Well, fuck you. I ain't doing this to win some damn literature prize.

Chapter 2: The Welsh Disaster


DT awoke rather confused and felt kinda sick. She looked around to try and remember exactly where she was, after a few seconds she finally came to, mentally speaking. She got out of the bed and went off to wash her face. Laying still in the bed was her lover Pai, he was also beginning to awake. Now, some of you may be wondering what just happened...so, just in case you didn't get the hint: Pai and DT fucked and DT collected her reward for “taking care” of the problem terrorizing the city. DT had convinced Pai to join her in her journeys in order to never be apart from each other again, and so he agreed happily. After getting ready and packing their things, Pai rubbed his shoulder, which had not yet completely healed yet. He was not the only one who appeared to have trouble with wounds, DT's back was still sore and needed dressing changes frequently. This posed a serious problem for the lovers, they didn't have the time to just wait around for their wounds to heal completely so they decided to seek out the best way possible to completely heal their wounds quickly, magic.

As the lovers were leaving the city, they happened to come across Brandon. DT told Pai about what had happened the night before, naturally...this pissed Pai off a lot. Pai confronted Brandon, “Hey you, did you punch her?!”
Brandon, “That's right I did, I also fucked her while she was unconscious!”
Pai jumped at Brandon and the two began to fight. However being that DT is indeed black, she did not believe in one on one fighting and jumped in as well. DT stabbed Brandon in his back with her blade, and then Pai lifted Brandon up on his shoulders and carried him towards the nearest dumpster where he threw him inside. DT and Pai left him there, however Brandon's run of bad luck had not ended just yet...for that dumpster was home to a vile creature named Bugz. Naturally, the creature had its way with Brandon before releasing him. Poor bastard...

Now even though this world is full of hocus pocus bullshit, it's not as easy to find a wizard as you may think! However DT has traveled to many distant lands and in her journeys has met some very interesting people, including a wizard by the name of Sam. The wizard was known by various names such as, Top, TopHat, TopSammy, Sam, Sammy, Samantha, or just Sammy kun. Now in order to reach the wizard, DT and Pai would have to travel a very long distance, for the wizard lived in a land known as Wales. Wales was a fairly normal land, with almost no fantasy-like creatures to be found...however the humans who did inhabit the lands spoke a very odd and rather funny dialect. Also they found it amusing to have sex with sheep and shit, pretty fucking gross, but moving on.

Mayor PT had heard news that DT was beginning to leave the city, so PT had his errand boy send DT a message regarding another quest for her to do. The errand boy was the same sour looking character DT saw when she first arrived in the city, the boy goes by the name of Iept. Iept managed to catch up to DT and Pai before they left and handed them the letter and informed them of Mayor PT's wishes. Before the errand boy left, DT asked the boy, “You! Why do you seem to be so...shitty?”
Iept responded, “Excuse me afro-american?”
DT, “What was that!?”
Iept, “Miss afro-american?”
Pai, “How dare you disrespect my love!”
And with that Pai jumped off his horse and threw the pathetic boy across the road, the poor boy passed out from the trauma he received from the toss, and with that DT and Pai left the city. However before the boy was able to regain consciousness, the vile creature Bugz came crawling back for more action...had his way with the boy too. Damn that's nasty.

As the interracial couple traveled towards their destination of Wales, they did happen to have to stop a couple of times. They happened to come across a small town by the name of Detroit. In the town of Detroit they had decided to get a quick bite to eat, however when they walked into the nearest cafe, a crazy crackhead tried to mug them. However his foolish attempt was quickly ended by a bitch slap from Pai. Now the town of Detroit was known for its nasty crimes and even more gross blacks, truly a shithole. As DT and Pai were leaving the town, they saw many things they wish they could do something about but they realized in their current status they were no match for the numbers of thugs and lowlifes surrounding them. As they left they could hear the screams of damned of Detroit, and in the back of DT's mind sprang across, “Someday...I'm gonna burn this place down.” And in the back of Pai's mind, “Where's my wallet?”

After a week's worth of travel the couple had finally arrived at Wales, however there was something wrong. DT realized the entire land had been conquered by trolls! Trolls were awful creatures, they fed on the anger, fear, and utter sadness that people shed. However this was no trouble for our great hero DT and her loving companion Pai! Or so you would think...because these trolls were being led by the greatest troll known in the land of AF: Unknown. He was a fearsome troll indeed, he had the ability to kill some humans with his pure voice and appearance! Luckily enough for the couple, Unknown had not yet made an appearance so this gave them a chance to quickly kill off as many trolls as possible. Wave after wave of trolls continued to attack the couple, they soon became fatigued. Eventually one of the trolls managed to grasp Pai and whisper into his ear, “NGE sucked ass”
Pai, “NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!”
And then with a loud howl, Pai turned into a werewolf from the sheer rage that the troll induced. He easily ripped the troll apart with his beast claws and jaws. And just as things were beginning to look better for our couple, Unknown appeared.

Surprisingly enough, DT found the creature to be rather attractive! She quickly looked away from the hideous creature's gaze and looked at her now turned beast lover and awaited his response. Pai leaped onto Unknown's face and began to claw away, or so they thought...for Unknown's drool began to pour down and cover Pai. This forced Pai into returning into human form. Unknown spoke, “gibberish gibberish gibberish, creepy shit, gibberish, nigbro.” His words were like nails on a chalkboard for DT and Pai and they screamed in agony! Unknown realized that DT was a female and began to drool even more and reached for DT. Before Unknown could touch her, a loud crack could be heard rumbling around the skies and then shortly followed by a brilliant light so bright that it temporarily blinded the lovers.

DT opened her eyes to see something she had not expected, Unknown the troll was being fought away by the very person she seeked, Sammy the wizard. Sammy unleashed a spell which confused the trolls and made them all run away. Sammy the wizard appeared as a god to DT as he walked over to her and her lover who were both badly injured, and said with a rather surprising tone, “I say, you appear to have suffered quite a beating my good chum DT.”
DT, “Save it you punk bitch! Help us out here...we're not looking so good.”
Sammy, “Indeed mate, not to worry! I'll have you both fixed up before tea is ready!”
And with that, DT and Pai passed out. Sammy the wizard took them both to his lair where he began to heal them both. He knew his magic may be enough to heal the lovers, however he was well aware that the trolls would return soon, and he alone could not take them down his magic...no, he needed the help of an old friend he had not since spoken to in ages.

End Chapter 2.

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Post by Pseudo Sat Aug 10, 2013 2:32 pm

I liked it better than the first chapter. XD
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Post by MikuHatsune Sat Aug 10, 2013 3:55 pm

"Pai rubbed his shoulder, which had not yet completely healed yet. " LOL!
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Post by CluelessNeko Sat Aug 10, 2013 6:23 pm

Pseudo wrote:
Zuly wrote:Where's the TL;DR version? Or better yet, the audiobook version?
The audiobook version will be read by unknown.
CluelessNeko wrote:Oh you kiko. Whatever happen to DT?
So, want to do the auidobook?
I could. Why the the hell not Neko.
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Post by NoblePhantasm Sat Aug 10, 2013 6:46 pm

omgz lol xd

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Post by PT-Desu Sat Aug 10, 2013 9:45 pm


fantastic, it will be hard to top this chapter
also can't believe Sammy saved DT


i added the 2nd chapter to the first post
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Post by Ojou Mon Aug 12, 2013 12:12 pm

  Pai's reaction is b-u-d-ful
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Post by Spectral Spider Tue Aug 13, 2013 12:48 am

My characterization in this story is ludicrous.
I mean... having sex twice?

That's completely inaccurate.
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Post by Ojou Tue Aug 13, 2013 12:54 am

I didn't read it but I just laughed when I saw Pai's post
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Post by Spectral Spider Tue Aug 13, 2013 1:05 am

Ojou wrote:  I didn't read it but I just laughed when I saw Pai's post  
Pai loves having freaknasty werewolf sex with DT.
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Post by Ojou Tue Aug 13, 2013 1:08 am

Pia why must you always be involved in some obscenity with DT?

First bootcamp rape now this?

tsk tsk.
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Post by Spectral Spider Tue Aug 13, 2013 1:20 am

Pai can't resist.
It's his slaveowner blood... he can't stop thinking about planting seed near her thick cottony trail.
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Post by Ojou Tue Aug 13, 2013 1:31 am

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Post by Pseudo Tue Aug 13, 2013 1:41 am

So he's got...."cotton fever?"
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