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Post by equal on Sat Dec 22, 2012 2:49 pm

I've always been more into photoshopping existing pieces but I've always wanted to get into making tags.

This is my first signature so constructive criticism and a push in the right direction would be much appreciated.



thanks!
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Post by Revy on Sat Dec 22, 2012 2:54 pm

Eh, it's not much but it's a start.

I would suggest looking at some tutorials and go from there.
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Post by equal on Sat Dec 22, 2012 2:56 pm

Thanks, do you have any tutorials that really helped you?

I'm stuck on that.
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Post by Revy on Sat Dec 22, 2012 3:07 pm

I use to go to Planetrenders and just browse the tutorial section for things that appealed to me.

I would mimic the sig as much as possible and get an idea of how the person does it, then make a new sig and try implementing my own "style" over the things i learned from the tutorial. You just get a feel for things and eventually you'll develop your own methods to making signatures.
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Post by Nanamix on Sat Dec 22, 2012 3:17 pm

There needs to be a focal. The slurred was an unnecessary effect. The text is simplistic and effective, and well placed, though it could be more varied with different sizing. Definitely needs a lot of polishing.

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Re: Please rate my first piece

Post by equal on Sat Dec 22, 2012 3:57 pm

Thanks for your help, guys!

And Nanamix, your signature looks absolutely amazing!
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Re: Please rate my first piece

Post by NoblePhantasm on Sat Dec 22, 2012 6:14 pm

My only suggestion is that you also post the original picture, to have a side-by-side comparison; at least when you're not dealing with renders and building something from the ground up.
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Post by Saya on Sun Dec 23, 2012 7:13 am

The motion blur effect going up makes it hard to look at.
Like nana said you need a focal

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Post by MikuHatsune on Sun Dec 23, 2012 7:19 am

miku cosplay sig, eh 10/10 would bang Adur

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Re: Please rate my first piece

Post by Kyu on Sun Dec 23, 2012 7:53 am

A bunch of washed up veterans in this thread.
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Re: Please rate my first piece

Post by equal on Sun Dec 23, 2012 8:38 am

Thanks, everyone. I've practised focals and I'm getting the hang of it. How should I apply that to a tag/signature?
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